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First Manuscript Review of "The Good News!"

I want to give you my overall impression of your work. What a fantastic piece you have put together here! Today we all need to do a little checking in with God and ourselves.  It seems that many of us have lost our focus and path. Your book is very enlightening. The way you present your ideas and findings and entwine them with scripture is great! You give your reader a lot to internalize. You have such a nice style of writing – very familiar and friendly.  You do a great job talking “to” your reader rather than “at” your reader.  In your prose, your words come across with a certain experience that I cannot put into words.  I can tell that you have done a significant amount planning and preparation in crafting your work.  So many authors rush into their work without really developing it. Not you. Your work is nicely paced and very engaging. It is good that you urge your reader to approach your book with an open mind.  With that approach they will gain so much more from your work! You have crafted an excellent piece here; one that should be well received by a wide audience.  Bravo!



Lisa Conner

Manuscript Review Team

Outskirts Press, Inc.




Response to Shay's Blog Post at:  Beliefnet Community


"Thanks mate this really helps in more ways than you know!!!  God bless you my friend"